Tuesday, February 9, 2016

Historical Story

Click this link to view screenplay: 
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxcufOFiIwAvVDVwaTFvQ2FnXzg/view?usp=sharing



Combined Artists' Statement:

Tom: When Trevor pitched his story about how his ancestors ran out the settlers of the neighboring homestead, I was immediately jealous of his family history, or rather, I was jealous of such a crazy story.  It inspired me to search through my family history to find something equally kooky that would contribute to the story.  I did not find anything close to running out neighbors with guns, but it surprised me how similar were some of the stories that I found.  In the book “An Aspen Creek Homestead,” my cousin Dale J Hartvigsen writes of a neighborly feud over water.  Most of the people in the valley had to get water from Aspen Creek.  The only problem was that it was contaminated.  If you did not purify the water first you would get Typhoid Fever.  However, there was a fresh spring on a neighbor's land.  So what did my ancestors do?  They piped into the spring without the neighbor’s permission, which eventually forced him to sell the land.  Fights over water were a real issue in the 19th century.  In our story, it serves as the basic motivation for the Germans to chase out their neighbors.

Trevor: Looking back at my family history after having pitched the story, I found that I’d completely exaggerated the events. One ancestor, Walter Smail from Pennsylvania (not a German) and some sharpshooter friends fended off claim jumpers after staking their claims. I heard the story as a seven year old and in the time that passed it grew into something stranger. The detail that stuck with me is only two sentences long: “Another man had staked his claim on the opposite corner to Bill’s 160. He set up a white tent planning on staying, but Bill and Walter shot it full of holes during the late evening and the next morning he had pulled out.” It’s a smaller and less terrifying conflict than my childhood memory of the story became, but there is truth to strangeness of the violence that my little mind honed in on. Remembering this way turned it into mythological truth, formed through the weird old tradition of oral storytelling. The story we wrote is heavily fictionalized, and that reflects the memory distortion and modern perceptions of a far removed time period.

How we wrote is in contrast to New Orleans after the Deluge which is journalistic in process and purpose. It looks at people, draws their faces and transcribes their voices, to bring awareness to the realities of their experience. Ours is a tall tale and a ghost story, exaggerated to reflect the weird distance of time and memory as well as the weirdness of a time when people shoot at each other to take what they want. Ours is also a critique of the attitudes of a time where actions like that are acceptable, and of how cool a younger version of me thought the violence was.

Tom: To finish our screenplay, we drew upon another story from our ancestry.  In the same book before mentioned, Dale Hartvigsen writes about a time when JF Hartvigsen met a naked Indian on horseback by his homestead.  The Indian was hunting for food while JF was tilling the land.   The contrast between settler and nomad was very interesting to us.  Here are our ancestors trying to “own” the land, even fighting over it, when in reality it had always belonged to the Indians.  In our story, after all of the settlers have killed each other for land ownership, the Indian kicks the cabin and it falls to the ground.

Tom Hartvigsen
Trevor Bush

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